急用~~~拜托高手帮我修改一下翻译。。

bozhimeng

原文 : 构建一个安全、交易公平、重视节能与环保的和谐消费环境,是实现政府、企业和消费者 三者共赢的基础和必备条件。每个企业作为一个企业公民,都应承担严格遵守法律、奉行高度的商业 道德、尊重传统文化、关注可持续发展等多方面社会责任。

译文 : Construct a security, justice of exchange, pay attention to the harmonious consumption environment of energy-conservation and environmental protection, realize the foundation that the three of government, enterprise and consumer win together and essential condition. Each enterprise, as the citizen of an enterprise, should undertake to strictly observe the law, follow high-level business ethics, respect community responsibility in many aspects such as the traditional culture, sustainable development of the concern.

The construction of a harmonious consumption atmosphere, based on a fair and safe transaction, environmental protection and energy-conservation, is the basis to achieve the "win-win" among the government, enterprise and consumer.
As an individual "citizen", each enterprise, while strictly complying with the law and regulation, should be committed to uphold the business credit and respect moral and traditional cultures and should also pay attention to social responsibilities required by the establishment of a sustainable society.

我的翻译,不足处请大家指出。

[ 本帖最后由 vincent_chen 于 2006-12-27 17:17 编辑 ]

vincent_chen

不过你的中文也有一些破句，搂主你这段东西像是哪位领带的致词阿